Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

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Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

#1 Postby EmeraldTH » Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:23 pm

(Fixed some stuff)

[Name:] Emerald The Hedgehog

[Age:] 17

[Gender:] Male

[Orientation:] Straight

[Species:] Hedgehog

[Relationship status:] Taken

[Weapons/Abilities:] Can control Demon Power. His only weapon his is sword.

[Personality:]
Other than the fact that he is a half-blood demon, He is a laid back, easy-going kind of guy who loves a good adventure or two. He can be sly and cunning, but he also loves a good fight. On the other hand, when he is in his demon form, he is ruthless, he does not care about the safety of others. He is also a little bit more powerful than when he is normal. He has big, black Demon Wings, A color-changed jacket that he usually wears, and pants. These things also have a fabric detail that is bursting out the seams. Literally. To sum it up, when he’s normal, he’s cool and adventurous, but when he’s a demon, he is a lot more ruthless and dark than ever.

[Likes:]
Hanging with friends, Exploring, Adventures, a good fight (Who the heck doesn’t?), Parties, and saving the World. He also likes to run.

[Dislikes:]
Metal Emerald, Cops, his past, annoying people, Demons who want to take over the world. He also dislikes all the schemes that his enemies have ever put before him countless times.

[Weaknesses:]
An attack from behind, His Dark attitude (when he’s a demon), his own past, Demon hunting equipment (If he gets caught). And, he is a lot more prone to the affects of the light that could be used against him.
Last edited by EmeraldTH on Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:40 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Re: Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

#2 Postby Vegeta » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:25 am

This seems somehow unfinished. What you do have written here is not bad though.

A suggestion? Tone his abilities down to one element and maybe lose the demon? Demonic powers seem to be overly done these days.
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Re: Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

#3 Postby SparDanger » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:39 am

Demonic powers seem to be overly done these days.
Makes me glad Edward's only half. XD
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Re: Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

#4 Postby Damasca Ramza » Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:15 am

I'm inclined to agree with Vegeta, your character is a little bit overpowered. I would suggest sticking to one particular power and unless they get mind raped from memories from their past, I think your characters need more weaknesses.
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Re: Emerald The Hedgehog Bio

#5 Postby EmeraldTH » Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:17 pm

Demonic powers seem to be overly done these days.
Makes me glad Edward's only half. XD
Emerald IS a half-blood XD


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